Late night, two plus hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Y1jkWsZXDk
2m22s It took them an extra second to get it, good job waiting for it
3m52s Acknowledge the “cmon”
3m57s I need a better way to go into this joke
4m51s Face the audience during the act out
5m21s Use different hands for me and Sandeep
Overall: Great set, especially considering how much comedy the crowd had heard by that point. Of course, there’s still some adjustments to be made.
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hqtt08jXmjQ
2m14s Change notch and the winning formula lines
2m48s Change neuro-habitate to something else
3m05s Try “cause I used to sell THEM fake…”
5m25s This joke still isn’t working
7m09s I can try going straight to, “No Nick, since I unfriended you, I don’t have to pay rent, cause you’re not Facebook official” or something like that
8m47s Say “talked about” instead of “did this”
Overall: Decent for a mic but I need to figure out the mobile adoption center joke.
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rDQe52Fay3A
1m30s I need to figure out a way to make this joke funny, I think the setup is off
2m33s Change neurocomic to something else
Overall: The mobile adoption center still needs to hit and my neuro examples could use some work
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cihw37JcRs
3m22s The pinky and eyebrow raise is funny
6m21s The fundraiser line is a good improvised line
6m31s The start to this joke is weird
8m28s If they laugh really hard, I don’t need to do the motion
9m29s The iPhone app part of this joke needs to be rewritten or killed
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhmbrSiiwks
1m15s The DVR joke needs to be funnier
1m27s Say “it’s the Netflix plan” not just “Netflix plan”
Overall: Very solid set. The the iPhone part of the Yelp joke needs fixing as does the DVR joke, but everything else is solid.
MCing a midnight show in the basement of a bar
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PIX027g0KhY
0m38s I should say “Florida isn’t much better than Detroit”
1m08s Say “Hi ladies” before the disappoint twice line
4m07s Address the girls yelling in the background
4m15s Good job shifting back to crowd work after a joke didn’t go great
6m05s Mixed up the “you” and “her” terms, but it still worked
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6v6uVZjpwgM
0m07s I could’ve played that Cliff doesn’t start with a “K”
3m01s Comment on the words getting stuck that just happened
3m31s Instead of “I did this” say “I talked about this”
Overall: Good job mixing in crowd work with material while hosting, but I could’ve done more crowd work towards the end. The last five minutes I only did material and I should try to engaged the audience more.
