Category: Comedy

A music/comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pq5MgGPIGTA

1m10s Do the republican line before the favorite joke line

2m53s That’s a good improvised line

3m07s After “sad puppy eyes” I should go “this is where I capitalize on her lowered self esteem”

4m02s Cut the medical jargon line

4m53s Go back to a little crowd work or acknowledge I lost them at this point

6m25s Pause after asking that question

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7OEqv3MbcAI

Overall: I wasn’t doing great to begin with then I totally lost them after three minutes and never got them back.

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYMGnPlFY-c

0m35s Good job acknowledging things

1m00s I forgot to bring up my hand like a gun

1m42s Add in “meet me in the bathroom”

2m08s Go back to saying “baggage check”

3m02s Don’t pause before “shmuck”

3m28s Smile more during this bit, don’t show the pain, haha

3m48s Pronounce “soufflé” properly

5m06s Good new tag

7m16s Start with marketing not neurogasm

8m29s After “you know the one” try saying “he’s like, I do now”

Overall: The A material worked better than the four or five new jokes I did in the middle, but they still got a decent amount of laughs and have potential.

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4aYAKGo8hi8

0m44s If mesothelioma gets a laugh, I should try “you guys know diseases better than I do, cause all I know is”

2m03s Smile a little more during this bit

2m47s Soufle hero is even better

3m58s Twirl the hair in the same place

5m34s Turn to someone and go “get out, dude”

Overall: Working out newer jokes, they need work but at least kitchen hero gave me an idea for a tag.

MCing my Astoria show for six audience members

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SInOA161kbk

0m57s Ask what she studies

6m17s Make it the same girl as the previous joke

8m41s I’m going too long without doing crowd work

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dvzp_DNwOl8

0m25s Go with the mess up, or address it more

0m58s Try a little harder to end on a laugh, especially since it’s my show and I can go long

5m04s Address the interruption more, get a laugh from it, say something like “Wow, Jewel still has more fans than me”

6m41s That’s a strong laugh to end on for this crowd

Overall: Mediocre to average. The jokes in between the comedians did fairly well.

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic, with the microphone not working

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_X47M0JVdc4

1m24s Say that line more seductively

3m04s Call out my lack of smooth running technique

3m50s Try “how about nineteen out of twelve?”

4m40s The toothpaste line is good

Overall: Working out some newer jokes, and as usual they need work