Going up 2.5+ hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf06mbq4pRw
3m39s Maybe I shouldn’t dead pan the delivery on that line
4m34s Rephrase to “talk higher”
Overall: Decent considering how long the audience had been there. The voting joke is getting better but still not fully there.
The writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wEQD6cbulxg
1m47s Instead of “I mean.. what a bargain” try “I know.. what a bargain”
2m02s Stop myself in the middle of the word “jersey”
2m18s Cut the celebrity part of the joke
2m54s Get to the impression quicker
Overall: Working out jokes. The new poster joke has potential.
Going first on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f2sxfb9M94g
1m35s I could’ve asked her if she was a philosophy major too
3m22s I should’ve given the plane punch line an extra second for a laugh
7m55s Decent job playing off of the situation even though it didn’t get a big laugh
Overall: Mediocrity at its finest. I should’ve gone into some crowd work or something caue the jokes were barely hitting.
Doing the check spot on a 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GhOPUgKK0t8
0m35s I should be more suave on the “hi”
0m58s Add in the “she’s like, that could be kinda fun”
2m05s Do a “clap it up for your wait staff” here since most people are focused on the check
3m54s Address the “ayyy yo”
5m10s Good job acknowledging the situation and bringing them back a little
7m05s Good improvised response
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1Ya–lfzwA
0m20s Great job on this whole interaction
0m42s I wish I heard the guy who said “that’s her sister” that would’ve been even funnier
1m22s Well played
Overall: I ate it from minute 2 to minute 6 while people were focused on the bill then I slowly got it back and had some great crowd interactions based off of my jokes and even got some applause breaks. And I had a fun with their responses.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vKz912U3u7k
0m25s Should’ve played off him saying “fella” that’s funny
1m08s This was the first time I tried this joke with a real crowd and it actually hit well
2m04s Good improvised line
3m59s Good job waiting for the laugh, it took them an extra second
5m36s Change it from “beatings tripled” to “neglect tripled”
6m59s Add in a “bring it”
7m20s The key is to pause for half a beat after “about”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2F9rNJbqzAg
0m24s Use the word “suspicious” as well as “weird” in there
1m03s Commit to the “pow pow pow” more
Overall: Real solid set, almost all of the punch lines on the new jokes worked
