A 6pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4d-o5JGb_BQ
3m14s I tried a new line here, it didn’t seem to work
4m02s Put my hand on my face first, like I’m really concentrating
Overall: The set got stronger as I went on. The voting joke still isn’t consistent.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VdKkrl7U50E
2m48s Don’t go up at the end of the sentence, it shouldn’t sound like a question
3m48s Weird that both the plane and baggage check lines missed
4m28s Sell the “ugh mom” better
5m06s Since I said “just don’t let it happen again,” I should’ve started doing the impression again to test her
7m10s That whole joke missed for the first time in a while
8m04s Good save after two straight jokes missed
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4oDM8AslO-c
Overall: I had a good first six minutes and a good last minute and a half and I muddled about for six minutes in between.
A 6:30 Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iaeK8kCuBH0
0m20s Should’ve added, “how would you like to go there tonight”
3m12s Nice improvised line from watching the audience
3m47s Repeat what her sound sounded like, then guess at what other times she makes that sound
4m51s I should call out how it’s funny that she apologized after I asked them to do it
7m20s I need a few extra words after calling them racist, like “everyone knows that…”
Overall: Average set. The voting joke missed but the other jokes worked fine.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1FSDSFF-10
4m23s Use the word “mechanics” in there
5m20s At least the “audience” is engaged now
Overall: Working out newer jokes at a mic. The heaven idea might have some legs.
MCing a bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_oaa52_rHcM
0m44s Delivery her line harder
1m41s Try “sales of ninja stars” or delve into why she only said “sales” cause that’s really general
2m35s I should’ve milked that for much longer than six seconds
6m20s I should’ve added on about needing to get a sponge bath or something
7m42s Hold the watch for longer
Part 2 – Time between comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6_J_sGByr5U
Overall: Mediocre. I didn’t push myself to do crowd work as much as I should’ve and I wasn’t as high energy as I should be as a host.
