The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwObi33Vls8
0m51s Always nice when I open with a new joke and it hits
1m38s That would’ve gotten a bigger laugh if I didn’t stumble over my words
1m53s Smile after that line
3m42s This should go before the “she just gave me a look like” line
Overall: Solid set. The new Israeli security joke did really well but the Israeli bus thing needs a stronger delivery to make it work.
An open mic with 5 or 6 comics in the room
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DaxfZz-f2vM
4m27s Try making it Nobel Peace Prize instead of Nobel Prize
5m35s The “ping” sound is better than the “pow” sound I was doing
5m52s Weird place to change from one joke to another
Overall: Decent considering it was poorly attended open mic
The 8pm show for 15-20 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7KH7y_uq-wA
0m56s It’s never good when the first joke and first save line both flop
3m14s Tilt my head higher up before bailing
4m27s Add in more “and he was like” before the act outs
4m53s Pause after “security didn’t like that answer either”
6m27s Never good when that’s the strongest laugh of the set
Overall: I bombed for the first six minutes, and did mediocre the last two.
An open mic with 5-6 comics in the room
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTcMncehfr0
4m18s Make more of a girl voice on that line
Overall: Pretty weak.
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8llP99P9YU
4m03s It should be “deductions” not “dependents”
5m31s Try cutting out a syllable and making it “kwanza-shana”
Overall: Average set but the Israeli security questions joke is hitting pretty well.
