Category: Comedy

A 6pm mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjYO3Gdv2sw

3m24s No need for the neglectful family commentary

Overall: Eh. Working out the New Years joke, it still needs work.

A 5pm mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d61mPeXzkzo

0m25s It was a callback to something another comic said about me earlier

2m36s Change the “hate fuck” line

3m47s Reply “but we don’t think the same”

Overall: Working out the New Years joke, it’s better than yesterday, but still needs serious work

MCing my Astoria show for 5 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=roREc9YumtY

4m09s They weren’t there for the show, so it doesn’t count as a walk

4m42s It should be “multi ten dollar” not “multi million”, I slipped up

7m08s Good improvisation, too bad it’s not reusable

9m40s Sell the heart attack for longer

Overall: Decent considering it was a small crowd. I barely did crowd work because everyone I knew everyone in the crowd.

2 hours into a hostel show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XQUypaNAoE

1m49s Deliver “not all the white ones are right” better

5m30s This instantly stopped sounding conversational

5m42s Get rid of the “clap if”

Part 2

httpv://ww.youtube.com/watch?v=wfxGJ5_Vg4w

0m27s Do air quotes for the word “passion”

1m38s Better response, “the only way to get back at him is for you to pick up at the show too”

Overall: Average at best. The New Years joke needs lots of work.

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://ww.youtube.com/watch?v=93QsiPY3fGQ

1m46s Do a much bigger smile before hitting that line

2m25s It’s not conversational to just go right into another joke, add an “oh man” or “I like you guys” or something

3m35s Cut the “clap if” part

4m10s Cut everything between “clap if” and here as well

Overall: Weak even for a mic. The first and last line of the New Years joke is good, the minute in the middle needs serious work.