Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Vyg4faq860
1m55s Instead of rich not having a personality, go into a different joke, then come back to “by the way…”
3m34s Cut the synagogue line
4m05s This needs a stronger ending
4m41s Get rid of this whole American security part
Overall: Still working out new material. Some of it is really starting to hit, I just need to cut the fat.
The worst open mic in the city
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yjbXF3jA6dE
0m39s Say “only available” instead of “available only”
2m02s This needs a stronger ending
Overall: The new material from this week needs more work but at least this mic went less bad than it usually does.
A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_S-rkZPmxA
2m42s Don’t workshop while doing the joke or say how it did well before
3m42s Cut the synagogue question
4m27s Cut the whole America part
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=su7QCguc3yY
0m15s I need a clearer setup
Overall: My new jokes mostly missed but the “Is-ra-el” line is really coming along strong. The 7 minutes of new material I did here needs to be cut down to 2.5 minutes and then it’ll be funnier.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfxD0lX4pAo
0m35s Try not dead panning these lines
1m32s Change “chanukah” to something else
2m18s Cut this whole “imagine if America did this” part, it’s too forced
4m35s This needs a stronger ending where the kid wins
6m12s The tags are funny but the setup is confusing and lacking
Overall: Working out new jokes at a mic, half of this stuff needs to be cut down.
Hosting my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=76DQvSeICtk
0m55s Get the wording tighter
1m21s Try “that’s the Detroit of the south”
1m52s Try “ayyyyyy box” instead
2m39s That hand motion is funny
3m51s It’s a guy with that name
4m19s Tighten the setup into one coherent sentence
4m48s Say “belt loop” instead of “belt”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WiuoqorPAQQ
1m39s This needs a stronger ending where the kid wins
6m07s This feels forced change the structure
7m58s Cut the synagogue question
8m15s Cut this whole “imagine if America did this” part, it’s too forced
Overall: My crowd work was respectable but I should try to maintain my high energy throughout. And my newer jokes need work.
