Category: Comedy

An open mic with 5-6 comics in the room

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTcMncehfr0

4m18s Make more of a girl voice on that line

Overall: Pretty weak.

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8llP99P9YU

4m03s It should be “deductions” not “dependents”

5m31s Try cutting out a syllable and making it “kwanza-shana”

Overall: Average set but the Israeli security questions joke is hitting pretty well.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-x9oEP66eaM

0m24s Cut the poly sci majors line

3m12s I think it should be “file those deductions” not “those dependents”

Overall: Pretty mediocre. Working out some newer stuff and rewrites.

Dec 8b

MCing a bar show with 6-8 audience members

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84CBzUmZKLs

2m39s Change “is paying for” to “bought”

3m27s Awkward jump from crowd work back into material, try repeating “Israel” like I’m thinking about it before doing the actual joke

6m28s Don’t actually go around the whole room

7m18s Go into the powerpoint joke I do

9m28s This joke needs a stronger ending

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3oGlzRQBxM

Overall: Decent job MCing but I could be even more energetic.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GHDqt0F7184

0m43s Add in “I sleep with women above 20”

1m52s Change “while” to “and”

3m37s Change “come on in” to “enjoy your trip”

3m55s Smile while doing this joke

Overall: Decent for a mic. I did three new jokes at the start, one of which, the “you don’t live too far” has decent potential.