An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWUl8Y6JH98
0m53s Change “if the girl” to “if my girl”
1m05s Smoother on the wording
1m45s Change the chart I’d bring
5m12s I need to do the Russian mom stuff that works first, otherwise it’s not a good test
5m54s More emphasis on “guys just got tired of waiting”
Overall: Decent for a mic. I need to not stumble over words when doing new jokes.
Doing a regular set at my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E52QJyhkkxE
0m27s Don’t punch “twice” that hard
5m14s Decent save, but I’m using too many of them
6m21s Gas furnace line feels a bit forced
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KuYPmugY7Io
1m55s Best laugh of the set
Overall: Pretty weak. When material isn’t working I need to go into crowd work, not more material.
Going last on a 3 hour comedy show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4QVMSUYmuXA
1m27s Try saying “NPR” instead of “Obama”
Overall: Decent only considering how long the show had been going.
A mic with some audience
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4DRcqOtmqWE
0m54s Instead of “putting pressure” it should be “applying”
3m29s Gas furnace tag might not be necessary
6m08s End it after “real sturdy belts”
Overall: So so. The dogs joke needs yet another rewrite.
An open mic with six or seven comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=34e6DDPP784
1m09s Point the mic stand to the side, not into the audience
1m41s Change “intersection” to “overlap”
3m18s Cut it after “real sturdy belts”
4m05s Change “nursery” back to “nursing home”
6m55s Don’t read an actual poem, just leave it as a one line save
Overall: Little to no response but at least I practiced not speeding up my delivery when a room is silent.
