Going last at a music and comedy mic for the 6-8 remaining people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q5PfyldEg08
1m17s Nice little transition between just talking and doing a joke
7m12s This joke has potential, I should flesh it out more
9m06s Keep selling the heart attack
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqcAfTrxMno
1m13s It should be “enjoy your trip”
Overall: Decent but not great. The dog joke has potential.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f9KDSh_IE1Q
2m17s Good to know that (especially) when things aren’t going well, this line gets a laugh
4m08s Don’t butcher the punch line
4m16s Nice bombing line, it will become a permanent part of the act
Overall: I bombed but I got a new line out of it, so it was worth it. Even if it’s not going well I shouldn’t comment on the crowd’s non laughing, as that won’t get a laugh either.
A 6pm mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjYO3Gdv2sw
3m24s No need for the neglectful family commentary
Overall: Eh. Working out the New Years joke, it still needs work.
A 5pm mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d61mPeXzkzo
0m25s It was a callback to something another comic said about me earlier
2m36s Change the “hate fuck” line
3m47s Reply “but we don’t think the same”
Overall: Working out the New Years joke, it’s better than yesterday, but still needs serious work
MCing my Astoria show for 5 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=roREc9YumtY
4m09s They weren’t there for the show, so it doesn’t count as a walk
4m42s It should be “multi ten dollar” not “multi million”, I slipped up
7m08s Good improvisation, too bad it’s not reusable
9m40s Sell the heart attack for longer
Overall: Decent considering it was a small crowd. I barely did crowd work because everyone I knew everyone in the crowd.
