Doing a check spot two plus hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPZBV7jvG6I
1m22s This persona should never say the word “joke”
1m34s Rephrase to “I’m not sure why you’re laughing, that’s horrible” instead of telling them not to laugh
3m25s Good line
7mA02s I seem more angry than creepy
Overall: Rough even for a check spot
A Sunday night show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zY5LTKZlJrY
0m18s One of the “girls” was a guy with long hair, whoops
3m09s Cut “she’s quite the seamstress”
3m22s Say “it won’t be” in a more singing way
4m35s Cut the netflix callback
6m11s Cut the model part of the dog bit
Overall: I opened with dark material and didn’t lose the crowd. I need to hone and rewrite material for this persona.
MCing the 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H0Ly8c3ugWc
2m37s Decent job going from crowd work to my material
4m07s Add “so that means you’re married”
4m25s The worse my guesses, the funnier it is
9m47s Good job ending the time up front with a big laugh
10m02s Doing time between comics
12m54s Doing the check spot as the MC
14m33s Good improvised addition to the joke
Overall: I didn’t get huge laughs but I did a good job being positive and likeable, which is more important as the MC.
A Saturday afternoon mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DjL6MfWL8Q
1m55s Cut the accomplice line
3m31s Cut “quite the seamstress
5m50s I look miserable
Overall: Weak even for a mic
The check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wslFzYx4zN8
1m56s The three people listening are enjoying it
3m08s A three person applause break during checks is nice
Overall: Decent for a check spot
