Performance Critique: January 23a

A Sunday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zY5LTKZlJrY

0m18s One of the “girls” was a guy with long hair, whoops

3m09s Cut “she’s quite the seamstress”

3m22s Say “it won’t be” in a more singing way

4m35s Cut the netflix callback

6m11s Cut the model part of the dog bit

Overall: I opened with dark material and didn’t lose the crowd. I need to hone and rewrite material for this persona.

Performance Critique: January 22b

MCing the 8PM show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H0Ly8c3ugWc

2m37s Decent job going from crowd work to my material

4m07s Add “so that means you’re married”

4m25s The worse my guesses, the funnier it is

9m47s Good job ending the time up front with a big laugh

10m02s Doing time between comics

12m54s Doing the check spot as the MC

14m33s Good improvised addition to the joke

Overall: I didn’t get huge laughs but I did a good job being positive and likeable, which is more important as the MC.

Performance Critique: January 21b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8p797VQ-xKw

0m48s Say something funny instead of just stopping and saying “hi”

1m32s I love when the mic breaks

3m05s Address the heckle better

4m59s The last 3.5 minutes would’ve been way funnier with the microphone on

5m38s Don’t say the same TV line twice

Overall: Bad set but good job not showing how annoyed I was that the mic was broken for four of the seven minutes.

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