An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LBTVOwbCSZY
2m11s Try saying “if you don’t uncross your arms” in my normal voice
2m23s Great improvised line
2m41s The “I’m a lefty” should be in the psycho voice
3m07s Cut out “cause”
4m24s Say the father line in the normal voice
5m59s Say it more playfully
Overall: The idea of going in and out of the character works, but I need to think of a smoother way to introduce the voice
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Olnpy0bNK4o
2m04s Cut the dog eating line
3m58s Weak acting like I’m thinking before saying the “I guess” line
5m12s Reorder the words of these two lines
5m57s It should be “kids” not “children” the second time
6m52s Finish the sentence
7m04s Say “good thing I brought mine” a little more playfully
9m18s Try “I’m also a good person” instead of “and I’m…”
10m01s Finish the sentence even if improvising
10m47s Try “must’ve felt” instead of “felt”
13m02s Say “lucky lady” instead of “lucky audience member”
Overall: A little up and down but good set.
A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1TiLJNa4Uo
1m52s Cut the dog eating line
5m03s This needs a word other than “nunchucks”
Overall: Average to weak response for a mic
Going last on a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=geceBcttg4M
1m12s Turn my head to one direction or another on the “romantic” line
2m18s Cut the dog eating lines
4m22s Put the emphasis on “mine”
6m30s Add “I guess” before “I should’ve warned”
9m08s It should be “women’s” not “women”
Overall: It took a couple minutes to get the crowd with me, but then it went pretty well.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E_Tgn-0WoMo
3m22s Pick a word and go with it
4m33s Too much pause between the previous part of the joke and this, don’t bother with the second part if there’s a little crowd work between
Overall: Some laughs but a generally weak set.
