An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQvE5DMTjDY
1m35s Say “usually” instead of “kinda”
4m50s The warning line should be in my regular voice
5m14s Do a better job miming the balloon animal process
6m04s Say “knock knock” in my regular voice and respond in the crazy voice
Overall: Decent for a mic, but I should adjust what lines are used in which voice
A 10pm show for a few people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r1uGLUvBQ20
2m12s Say this within the first minute of the set
4m43s Always nice when an improvised line gets a (small) applause break
7m35s Try saying “bring it” in the crazy voice
9m45s Don’t switch voices mid character
11m15s No need for a second save line in a row when the first one got a good laugh
Overall: Great set but I need to fine tune which parts use which voice.
Going last on a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GgQEfGs9_BA
2m20s Wait for all the laughs to stop before saying “inflation”, especially since it’s a one word punch line
2m55s Maybe address how the voice sounds but don’t do the examples right away
4m25s The “if” part of that sentence didn’t make sense
4m39s Do the “you people are making me feel uncomfortable” line before the “cut the tension line”
7m25s Use the crazy voice for the entire sentence
9m31s Ask the question in my normal voice
Overall: Very up and down. The first minute of room observations completely missed, the next few minutes of jokes hit, then I got interrupted by a heckle mid joke and didn’t have a great comeback and lost them for a bit, then I got them back, then I lost them again.
Doing a set at my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1dE2hxS-elg
4m59s There were people walking by slowly so I tried to address it
5m44s Good improvised line
7m42s Might be funnier to make an inflating the balloon motion first
Overall: Good set especially with the small crowd, it almost seems that the psycho character plays better in front of smaller (under 30 people) crowds
Doing a spot 2+ hours into a small show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8DHhViayDmo
1m24s Reword to “the voice usually sounds like this”
1m38s Don’t justify them not laughing, either use a save line or let it go
4m49s The father line can be said in my regular voice
Overall: Mediocre set. I remembered it going better than it went on the tape.
