Category: Comedy

A show for 10-12 people in central NJ

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GHqGKETivkg

8m12s Change it from “lucky audience member” to “lucky lady”

8m44s More emphasis on “kills”

Overall: An up and down (and up and down and up) set.

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3RDCBRYp48M

Overall: Decent for a mic. I introduced the character but then didn’t really go in and out of it, and I think the effect can be stronger if you never know in which voice I’ll say the next line.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5XlVboGVtY

1m17s Do the laugh stop after that line

2m42s Say it a little more playfully

5m12s Smile a little

Overall: I got some laughs but it felt weaker than the previous night.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fzxA9QNKHeg

5m35s This line needs a stronger end

7m27s I can add, “that’s also how I like my sex”

Overall: Great set doing the psycho character

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LBTVOwbCSZY

2m11s Try saying “if you don’t uncross your arms” in my normal voice

2m23s Great improvised line

2m41s The “I’m a lefty” should be in the psycho voice

3m07s Cut out “cause”

4m24s Say the father line in the normal voice

5m59s Say it more playfully

Overall: The idea of going in and out of the character works, but I need to think of a smoother way to introduce the voice