Category: Comedy

Opening for an improv group

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSxb83j2ztc

2m02s Keep the mom voice the same pitch throughout

2m09s Sound more annoyed on the word “plane”

2m24s Try saying that in the normal voice

3m28s Laugh for another second

5m46s They said I was doing five minutes, so the clock in my head went off

6m35s Finish the joke, then point that I saw the light

Overall: Average set, slightly better than average considering the MC didn’t do any jokes before bringing me up. The set could’ve been a little more conversational.

The Sunday writers mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VgyjPHbbc5c

1m03s The voices line should always be the second bit I do, not the third

2m56s Reword to make this a statement instead of a question

3m40s Use the word “if” instead of “whether”

Overall: Working out new stuff, and it needs work

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjW3jLczJDQ

1m32s Weird that the three lines before that didn’t get much response, but this line did

3m27s Do this in my regular voice

6m11s Good job ending on a strong laugh

Overall: Solid set but not amazing. Even though the stuff is working, there’s a couple of adjustments needed.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0vdNIkqMx2U

2m30s Make the accent more consistent

5m10s Say the “fall in love” and “romantic” lines in my regular voice

8m52s Make an act out voice for the “call the cops” line

Overall: Average with some good moments but the momentum could’ve built better.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VAMdCV1j8XQ

1m51s Nice to get applause breaks at a mic

2m10s It should be “chiseling” not “carving”

2m52s Make it a statement, not a question

3m35s Cut or fully rework that last joke

4m39s Might make sense to change voices in the middle of this

Overall: The old joke went over really well, the new jokes need work