Category: Comedy

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aRY66zbDIjg

1m41s Laugh for a second longer

4m20s Add on “that must mean he loves you”

Overall: Solid set with strong laughs throughout.

Going up 2.5+ hours into the show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i41q1pKIGok

6m24s Figure out a better line than “has woken up the next morning”

Overall: Great set with consistently strong laughs throughout.

Another mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K52K50bA_0w

3m08s Say “I hate flying first class” in my normal voice, or even better, cut this joke

5m42s Reword and tighten her criticisms

Overall: The new mom joke has potential but needs work.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3EMJOidgKw

1m20s Speed up the delivery

4m00s Say “if” instead of “whether”

5m10s Tighten and reword what she says

Overall: Working out a bunch of new jokes, the mom criticism has potential

The 8pm show with about 20 audience members

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dm8NzVKUiZs

2m07s Keep the accent consistent

2m31s Do these lines in my regular voice

4m08s Say it a little more playfully

5m52s Laugh for a little longer

8m06s Good job handling and addressing the interruption, too bad that’s the strongest laugh of the set

Overall: I remembered this going a lot better in person than on the tape.