An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3NbPy2NukE
1m14s Good instant response
2m27s Cut the sense of humor line
3m36s Cut the yoga
4m25s Say “broke” instead of “impoverished”
Overall: Working out new jokes
Performance Critique: March 16b
A check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ya-74n456Dk
0m26s No need for “I got you”
3m54s Lean forward a little more
4m27s Should’ve done the dogs bit here
Overall: It started okay and then went downhill. The last 3 minutes were painful even for a check spot.
Performance Critique: March 16a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=owvitzu469Y
1m20s This is the new two lines of the joke, they’re decent
1m37s Say “hell” instead of “fuck”
2m25s Make it “unsolved mysteries”
3m27s Say “shrink” instead of “psychologist”
4m05s The mom should just be “back to school”
5m44s First line should be “you not scary”
Overall: Working out mostly new stuff, it needs work
Performance Critique: March 15c
Closing out a 10PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8QdtLvyioY
3m18s Good job improvising and calling out a situation
6m59s Weak joke good save
9m46s Great acknowledgement line
10m53s Cut the motor scooter joke
11m11s Cut the yoga line
12m22s Great improvised description
15m56s Pause after “Jewish Christmas”
Overall: A couple new jokes missed in the middle but otherwise a very solid 17 minute set.
Performance Critique: March 15b
Doing a spot on my Queens show with 8 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yaCW1TfM-k
0m38s I love when the mic goes in and out
4m21s Pause another second to add to the randomness of the puppies statement
8m06s The electric fence line should be in the crazy voice
Overall: Respectable set for a small crowd.
