Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0EKuS6rD9o
2m18s Tell her to let it out, not cover it up
3m48s That was a decent response
6m02s Good response
6m27s Good call back
Overall: Considering it was a rough check spot, I did a good job not being too fazed and had a couple of decent responses to heckles.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BW7qx4szNRg
1m27s Could’ve had a funnier response
3m00s Weird that the plane line missed when everything else hit
4m24s Don’t use the word “jokes” in there
6m11s Do a full room scan first, then say the line
8m46s Cut the “plus minus” line
9m18s Add “that’s why I do it”
10m18s End on the laugh, no need to plug the website
Overall: Solid set, could still use a couple of adjustments
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_8ltngnWiQ
0m10s The previous comic put the mic in his armpit
2m00s Telegraphed the joke
3m32s Setup the joke in the crazy voice too
3m45s Nice when a new joke gets applause
5m05s Some of these lines need to be in different order
Overall: Good for a mic, a couple of the new jokes are getting there
A show for 54 Irish high school students and their chaperones
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EdsVjBkx8e0
0m39s Change this to “I laughed too”
0m45s Say “we’re not friends” more excitedly
6m04s Good improv line that could become a normal line
Overall: Great set. Also great to know young foreign (native English) audiences find the bipolar psycho act funny.
Going up early at the music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hha_N78XmuI
2m13s Second and third part of this needs work
2m38s This needs a stronger line than knitting sweaters
3m40s Say “gruesome” instead of “horrifying”
4m22s Cut this
4m34s Cut or rework the hotel bit
5m05s Cut the wall to wall funerals
5m28s Pause after “don’t worry”
5m40s The “alone” line should be in the crazy voice and the “dangerous out there” in the normal voice
6m15s Try the setup in the crazy voice too
6m48s That’s new and a keeper
7m15s Cut the cocker spaniel line
8m00s Nice to see it start working really well the third time I try this joke
Overall: Two of my newest jokes got applause breaks and four or five fell flat, so that’s a win.
