The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rd9_-CTFevQ
4m01s The electric fence should be in my normal voice
Overall: Standard open mic response, I’m working on going in and out of the crazy character.
Performance Critique: February 26b
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZU6Pj8msJPE
0m45s Don’t open with the joke I just opened with
3m30s Might want to consider cutting the agent line
5m20s I should’ve addressed the heckle
6m25s When interrupted go straight to “Jesus would use a ripsaw” instead of “you’d be surprised”
6m52s Reword to “Florida license plates”
Overall: I bombed and the character didn’t connect with the audience and didn’t respond to the interactions well.
Performance Critique: February 26a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NU0KsULugXc
1m42s It should be “I don’t” not “you don’t”
4m43s This is a good idea but needs to be worded better
Overall: Average response for a mic.
Performance Critique: February 25b
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0BA-PEjFIyk
0m43s I don’t like this “I feel like laughing” so early in the set
2m27s Look at that table for the time between those two lines
Overall: On video it sounds like a decent set, but in actuality one table loved the character and the rest of the room hated it (or at least didn’t laugh much).
Performance Critique: February 25a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XAqPstpWDuM
4m07s Try “O indeed” instead of “yeah”
6m04s Rephrase to “too bad her life insurance was so high”
Overall: The last two minutes went much better than the first five
