Going up 2.5+ hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i41q1pKIGok
6m24s Figure out a better line than “has woken up the next morning”
Overall: Great set with consistently strong laughs throughout.
Performance Critique: March 14b
Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K52K50bA_0w
3m08s Say “I hate flying first class” in my normal voice, or even better, cut this joke
5m42s Reword and tighten her criticisms
Overall: The new mom joke has potential but needs work.
Performance Critique: March 14a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3EMJOidgKw
1m20s Speed up the delivery
4m00s Say “if” instead of “whether”
5m10s Tighten and reword what she says
Overall: Working out a bunch of new jokes, the mom criticism has potential
Performance Critique: March 13c
The 8pm show with about 20 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dm8NzVKUiZs
2m07s Keep the accent consistent
2m31s Do these lines in my regular voice
4m08s Say it a little more playfully
5m52s Laugh for a little longer
8m06s Good job handling and addressing the interruption, too bad that’s the strongest laugh of the set
Overall: I remembered this going a lot better in person than on the tape.
Performance Critique: March 13b
Opening for an improv group
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSxb83j2ztc
2m02s Keep the mom voice the same pitch throughout
2m09s Sound more annoyed on the word “plane”
2m24s Try saying that in the normal voice
3m28s Laugh for another second
5m46s They said I was doing five minutes, so the clock in my head went off
6m35s Finish the joke, then point that I saw the light
Overall: Average set, slightly better than average considering the MC didn’t do any jokes before bringing me up. The set could’ve been a little more conversational.
