Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8C-08eqNFR4
4m26s Don’t say “today” twice in the sentence
5m08s Say it in my normal voice
8m09s Scan the whole room before saying that line
10m32 Say it in my normal voice
Overall: Good. The new mom bit is coming along.
A show in NJ
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APOKbbK_SKM
2m55s Going a little fast, pause between the mom lines
5m22s I should’ve addressed all the talking in the back by now
6m54s I should’ve addressed the weak response much sooner
7m05s Should be doing crowd work much sooner when it’s going like this
Overall: The first sentence I said got a big laugh and so did the last sentence. Everything in between was a struggle and I didn’t connect with the audience.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0bJJcpJ8xdE
1m48s Lean forward more
3m49s Slow down the hand motions
Overall: Decent for the first four minutes, then I lost them
A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vfwGCIeIEQ0
2m29s I can probably add “well you’d probably agree with this” to go back into my material
4m41s The if condition before “I’ll remember you” needs to make more sense
5m10s Change “apartment” back to “basement”
6m00s This could have cleaner wording
6m28s Say the follow home line in my normal voice
9m34s Brought them back after a lull
Overall: I started strong, had a weak 3 or 4 minutes in the middle, got them back, then lost them again in the last 40 seconds.
Doing a bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2R-JFBFBvgE
2m39s The thesaurus joke needs a few more lines
2m49s Great response to that line
5m17s Coordinate the arms and hips better, it should be a little more mechanical
6m14s Reverse the line, it should start with friends buying dvds and end with businessman
Overall: A little up and down, but the new mom thing worked well.
