Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f28bOFUKI5Q
0m21s This sentence needs to be way smoother and faster
3m23s Get rid of “being” in the sentence
Overall: Working out newer material at a mic.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f28bOFUKI5Q
0m21s This sentence needs to be way smoother and faster
3m23s Get rid of “being” in the sentence
Overall: Working out newer material at a mic.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMBFmXBYaoI
3m18s Shrug first, then say the line a second or two later
5m20s The uncomfortable line doesn’t work as well after a laugh
7m32s Slow down the hand motion
Overall: Solid set, parts of the last joke could’ve been stronger.
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPbn_69HO1E
1m52s A one person applause break during a check spot
2m50s Good job going where the crowd work took me
5m39s Could’ve added “now I’m your friend, I sold you out”
Overall: Good for a check spot.
The 8pm show for a small audience
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIKJ69PsOv8
0m36s Don’t address the voices right after
5m24s The hand should come back down on the hip on the third “ha”
Overall: Up and down, with a little more down than up.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Llk4OdLu8c
1m22s Different setup for an old joke that never worked
4m59s Sync the hand motion with the words
5m57s Good call back at the end
Overall: Standard open mic response.