The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMBFmXBYaoI
3m18s Shrug first, then say the line a second or two later
5m20s The uncomfortable line doesn’t work as well after a laugh
7m32s Slow down the hand motion
Overall: Solid set, parts of the last joke could’ve been stronger.
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPbn_69HO1E
1m52s A one person applause break during a check spot
2m50s Good job going where the crowd work took me
5m39s Could’ve added “now I’m your friend, I sold you out”
Overall: Good for a check spot.
The 8pm show for a small audience
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIKJ69PsOv8
0m36s Don’t address the voices right after
5m24s The hand should come back down on the hip on the third “ha”
Overall: Up and down, with a little more down than up.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Llk4OdLu8c
1m22s Different setup for an old joke that never worked
4m59s Sync the hand motion with the words
5m57s Good call back at the end
Overall: Standard open mic response.
Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8C-08eqNFR4
4m26s Don’t say “today” twice in the sentence
5m08s Say it in my normal voice
8m09s Scan the whole room before saying that line
10m32 Say it in my normal voice
Overall: Good. The new mom bit is coming along.
