An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWbB0GeqNk0
0m10s Don’t start out so negative
1m52s Rework everything after “Android”
2m35s Keep cutting and rewriting the joke up to here
2m47s At least save lines work
3m42s Change “every time” to “whenever”
4m38s It’s not clear that I’m talking to myself, I need to learn to act better before doing this
Overall: Weak even for a mic. Rewrite and tighten the new stuff, and don’t start out so negative, even at a mic.
Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEiIZE4bAtE
4m04s Nice improvised line
9m19s No need for “unlike you antisemites”
Overall: Great for a check spot
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXAto53DbJA
1m24s Think of a smarter punch word than that
2m30s Cut this joke
3m27s Say “their” not “the”
3m35s Better yet, probably cut this joke
Overall: Working out newer jokes
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EOhIRNhO7_w
5m00s Could’ve addressed it a little sooner
5m08s But good job addressing it
Overall: Respectable for a check spot
The 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBHEoTgN1Ps
1m50s Stepped on a laugh a little
7m00s Glance around for an extra second
8m05s Hit “businessman” harder
Overall: Strong set.
