Category: Comedy

Going first at a open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7k0ZhFl0OY

1m39s Good end line of the joke

Overall: Good for a mic, got consistent (small) laughs throughout

A music and comedy mic for 6-8 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvZh2j5oaCs

1m01s Sound snarkier on “someone went to Yale”

1m21s Don’t split up the two iphone bits

1m37s Change “skin color” to race

4m50s Princess line might be a keeper

5m38s Don’t crack up during this

Overall: Tried out new stuff and most of it needs rework.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxBPUZ1EuVc

The 9pm show with low lighting

2m40s Stepped on laughs a little

3m23s Scan the room first before going into my regular voice

4m40s Don’t do the uncomfortable line after a laugh

Overall: Eh, not great not terrible.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s7LCbAUxoQo

1m12s Blackberry user line is a keeper

1m30s Cut the old people lines

3m09s No need to say those comments

5m09s Say “two of two” not “two for two”

6m18s Cut or rewrite this

Overall: Average to weak mic response while working out newer stuff.

The 10PM show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_9JwP8Nj9A

0m33s Good job starting with improvised stuff

3m18s Cut ore rewrite everything between “one mighta been an Android” to here

4m01s Cut the Prussia joke, although the improvised save line was good

5m45s It should be “have doctorate” not “get doctorate”

6m40s Cut or rewrite this joke

7m20s Cut the UFO line

Overall: The new mom rewrite worked well, the rest of the new stuff I tried needs to be cut or rewritten.