An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LTyYD7hcD1M
1m21s Good delivery on that line
1m48s Good job being in the moment and calling out what happened
4m03s Make a smoother motion for my arm to get to my hip
4m27s Smile harder
Overall: Good for a mic.
Going up last 2.5+ hours into the 10PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AXWC-E-xOo
4m06s Good job incorporating their response into my line
Overall: Mediocre but the new mom bit works well.
MCing the 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIdx76im7Yc
0m24s I should have them clap again after that intro and before I go into material
0m42s Eight to ten people walked in after it started, doubling the audience
1m42s The psychic stuff could’ve been more playful and less aggressive
2m24s More people walking in
2m31s I might as well ask them what their job is at that point
3m27s Could’ve gotten them clapping way earlier before this
3m35s Make it more playful to quiet them down
5m04s Call them out on bullshit that I’m right and do a little more crowd work
5m28s Don’t do this joke when the better jokes aren’t hitting
5m47s First decent laugh, ugh
8m34s The guy got to my punch line before I did, the downside of repeat audience
10m04s I need to respond with a “you look like _”
11m00s Try “device” instead of “devices”
Overall: Horrible. People kept walking in while I did my time upfront and I didn’t handle it well. They ordered loudly and I tried to address it but wasn’t able to control the room. My crowd work was unfunny and a little too aggressive. I need to really work on my MCing.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwkfnpCEaPo
0m50s More indignation and snarkiness during the line “someone went to Yale”
2m22s Try saying “it helped me turn sentences like”
3m51s The arm movements could be funnier
Overall: Decent for a mic, adjustments for new stuff still needed
Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDjMBMuuJs8
0m13s They decided to play Russian music when bringing me up, so I improvised some lyrics
3m38s Nice honest moment
5m52s The guy actually showed everyone his pocket knife
9m18s Cut the warranty joke
10m09s Cut this joke too, not clear enough
Overall: Worked out newer materials, the first 8 minutes were good
