Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ybu_53Py5BM
0m34s Say the sentence without stuttering
2m21s Cut the “you’re looking at me like” line
3m08s Don’t pause after “might be” only after “overestimating”
Overall: I did some jokes that were so old they’re practically new.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOC1UcHlPgk
6m09s Add in “he’s like, “whew that was a close one””
6m56s Better than usual delivery on that line
9m05s Hand should go to the hip on the third “ha”
Overall: Solid set with good laughs throughout.
The 8PM show with a light turnout
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=paRO4VVxBhg
4m54s It should be “great poetry” not “fun poetry”
7m35s Pause for a second longer before the smile
Overall: Pretty weak. I should’ve tried crowd work since they clearly weren’t feeling the material.
Doing a set at a bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1I0aIH5a5eE
0m10s Call out the second whooo if I’m gonna call out the first one
2m40s Speed up the sentence even more
6m42s Don’t mention the “insane” thing during this setup
8m41s Doesn’t make sense to say that line after I say a normal thing
Overall: Mediocre
MCing my Astoria show for a few people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mASkqofoNzY
2m11s That’s a good occupation “repressed tax auditor”
4m21s Good job addressing the situation
4m44s Say the line faster
7m20s Try “by 24/7 hotel management do you mean drug dealing?”
9m38s I should use that when someone isn’t a librarian, “so you can read”
Overall: Decent job MCing and going between crowd work and material
