An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrD-USwVvOM
1m27s Good sell on the snarkiness
2m14s Cut those two lines
4m58s Decent new save line
5m13s Change “throat” to “windpipe”
Overall: Decent for a mic. Newer stuff needs to be cut down.
Performance Critique: April 17b
The 10pm show with 9 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UwnqrgN6fQc
0m07s Sound more annoyed during this sentence
2m37s Good improvised line
3m54s I love when this line hits this hard
5m52s Nice laugh to end on
Overall: Solid for nine people, and my two new jokes at the end went over pretty well
Performance Critique: April 17a
Going first at a bar show for 5 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmZ4gbzqCe0
1m44s Try crowd work at this point
5m08s This is a big laugh for this room
5m15s Make it “dog foot” instead of “dog feet”
7m19s Go to “really?” first if I get it right
9m00s I should’ve sat down in the chair
9m15s Crowd work is decent, might wanna keep the Friendly’s line
12m32s The worse I’m doing, the better that line does
16m04s Good improvised alliteration
18m32s Decent line
20m14s Put the hand down first, then lean forward
Overall: I did over twenty minutes without notes and stayed positive although I wasn’t getting much response.
Performance Critique: April 16c
Doing a check spot on the midnight show for 9 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uaMoK0I7TqU
5m22s Try not stepping on time delay laughs
5m30s If I’m playing favorite tables, I gotta tell other tables to step up their game
Overall: The second half went better than the first half
Performance Critique: April 16b
The 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DaA3hIqhlnI
0m07s Give it another second for the clapping to die down
2m47s Don’t do the thesaurus joke if the previous joke doesn’t do great
3m23s Might make sense to instantly respond “I didn’t even know Shalom, I was like”
4m23s This is why I didn’t address it at the start, it could throw off the flow of the joke
5m02s Hit the line snarkier
5m30s Good improvised end
Overall: Decent but not great set. I purposefully avoided doing my split personality act because it was a fundraiser show and those crowds tend to dislike edgy material
