Performance Critique: April 8b

The 8PM show with a light turnout

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hiTHNs9X7r0

5m34s Instead of “I don’t know why you’re laughing” I should say “unlike you, I was like, oh my god…”

6m16s Good job being in the moment

8m14s Figure out a better non verbal reaction for the security guard

9m31s I could also call him out for having an asian fetish

10m35s Good job continuing to play with pitting the sides of the room against each other

13m18s I don’t think the audience noticed the comics talking, so I shouldn’t have called it out

13m58s Going a little fast here, slow down

Overall: More or less consistent laughs through most of the set, the last minute got weak though.

Performance Critique: April 7b

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=strq3jicuX4

0m45s Add “that’s the real tragedy”

2m06s Good improvised line

3m36s Not sure what they said

5m41s Nice to see that line working

5m57s Say “I do take requests, thanks”

8m25s Hit “businessman” harder

Overall: Solid set

Performance Critique: April 6

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXuLOXzIGK4

1m38s No need for “I feel that” just go straight to “everyone”

3m07s Try “at least as far as the social security office knows” instead

Overall: Average to mediocre for a mic.

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