Category: Comedy

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_LBfXSbYW_4

0m11s Acknowledge the audience before starting, or stare at them until all the talking stops

0m45s Don’t stutter on store

2m08s Reword to “I probably shouldn’t have pointed at”

2m20s I’m not sure what he said, but I should’ve addressed it more

4m18s Go into the interruption more, even if it got a laugh

6m09s I should hit that line harder

8m27s Address it more and don’t talk over it

Overall: Mediocre set with a couple of big laughs in the middle. I should do a better job of addressing the talking.

An open mic for five or six comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JThnzMkDxoU

3m26s Change strangulation to piano

4m40s Change this punch line

5m29s Change twelve to dozens

Overall: Weak even for a mic. The less people watching, the more I have to start my set by talking to people instead of going into jokes.

Late night music and comedy

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JqHheBZS70

0m29s The guy before me was doing Tupac covers, it was funny

2m54s Guy said “that’s a lot of people”

8m57s Don’t do all the bombing material in a row, even if it’s at a mic

9m24s Try adding “I’ll shimmy my way into your dreams”

10m04s This needs to be considered an A joke

Overall: Really good set, newer material and rewrites went over well.

A feedback mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wzR8103xSTU

1m21s Go higher energy

5m17s Cut dog foot and bear urine and knees

5m29s Cut Russian roulette lines

6m29s Change it to piano wire

Overall: Slow start then the second half went really well

A backroom bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzAhuyx4Qi0

1m15s Instead of “arms crossed like someone” try “arms crossed, I guess someone”

2m30s Good improvised moment that I should try to reuse

3m58s It’s funnier if I turn to the side before saying it

5m40s The better line is “if you keep saying wow”

7m30s Cut the dog foot and knees lines

Overall: Mediocre with a couple of big laughs.