Performance Critique: April 29a

An open mic with five comics in the audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUl6B7xDMGc

1m29s Say this in less words

1m34s Change “TPS reports” to “meeting”

2m24s Best advice I’ve given

4m49s At least I’m making a bad mic interesting

6m11s Rework the dream line

Overall: I had fun in a unfun situation

Performance Critique: April 28c

Late night music and comedy

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7xbMCMRedo

1m04s Instead of “pissed off everyone” it’d be even funnier if I said “pissed off the two toughest looking guys in the room”

3m45s Say “talk” instead of “thing”

5m56s Say the sentence smoothly

6m00s Commit harder to the act out

9m55s Doing a joke I haven’t done in a few months at 2am right after waking up from a nap, nice

Overall: Respectable for having just woken up and good crowd interaction at the start

Performance Critique: April 28b

Going first on a 9PM show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oW8MyWl0O0

1m15s Good job doing a minute of noticing the room before going into the jokes and getting good laughs from it

3m00s Good save line

4m41s Good callback to previous crowd work

5m21s If breaking up the two lines with “you’re like, I do” the second line should be, “I need choking to fall in love” instead of “I need it to fall in love”

5m59s I can add in “this is the only time I can confidently say, mine is bigger than yours”

7m40s Lost them on this joke

Overall: Good crowd work to start and some of the jokes hit decent, but I lost them on the last joke.

Performance Critique: April 27b

Going last at a comedy and music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikMjBt9fWZA

1m01s Add in “there’s an open sex slave mic after this show ends”

2m41s Over two and a half minutes before doing material, might be a bit long

5m29s Answer with “intuition”

8m38s Don’t over explain it

Overall: I did a good job of just talking to the audience at the start for a few minutes and got consistent low laughs afterwards.

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