A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wofGlk9MTkM
0m53s Make the nose motion bigger
7m41s My head should move side to side separate from my body swaying
Overall: Average to mediocre.
Performance Critique: May 4a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R0LQCTJ5OP4
3m08s Rework the “I have a dream” line
4m15s The apology line should have a punch line in it
4m34s Only one hiccup in the act out, not two
6m54s Tighten the setup
Overall: Standard weak mic response
Performance Critique: May 3
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zPJZBMryik
2m42s Cut the coworker part
3m34s Rephrase the shrinks sentence to be smoother
4m42s Add a “because” before “he’s from”
6m06s Hit “normal person” harder
6m47s Keep bouncing around more while in the character
Overall: Eh. At least I’m learning which new tags work and which don’t.
Performance Critique: May 2
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5EBZiXtQ50
1m24s Cut that line
1m49s Change the voice for “hello, how are you”
2m08s Say I hear voices before doing the voice box line earlier
4m15s Sound drunker
6m00s Productive way to get feedback
Overall: Standard mic response
Performance Critique: May 1d
Going towards the end of a 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OnXws3suxQM
0m47s Tighten to “I wish adults were as honest as kids”
0m57s Have her say “I hate your shoes” and me reply “I hate your hair”
1m49s Less words
2m04s And have enough confidence with the crowd work to go right back to it
3m22s Force myself to work in a joke during the crowd work
5m20s At least the new line is hitting
6m48s That save didn’t work, cause they were never having that much fun
Overall: Weak set. My crowd work failed and that led to bits failing. I do better when my crowd work starts as a statement and not a question.
