An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8uZsw_rX64o
2m31s This bit isn’t funny if I look at my set list first, it’s funny because it’s supposed to be random
5m58s Change to “piano wire around your neck”
Overall: Standard mic response
Performance Critique: April 19b
A 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iw5tZqONZlA
1m41s Say “someone” even snarkier
4m14s Good organic call back, too bad it’s not reusable
5m54s Don’t do that line after a good laugh
6m29s Tighten this part up
Overall: Solid set.
Performance Critique: April 19a
MCing my Astoria show for a very small person
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LnyTVAQnvM
1m06s A minute long pep talk due to the low turn out
3m22s Good job noticing something that was going on, but I could’ve gone a more unexpected direction
Overall: Decent for the tiny crowd. I worked out newer jokes and did a couple of little in the moment things
Performance Critique: April 18b
Going up 2 hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGjyPKFWgak
0m08s I should say “thank you” before starting my first bit as it seems weird otherwise
1m28s Go back to a one finger gun
2m35s That should hit harder, not sure why it didn’t
Overall: Decent but not great. I had 3 big laughs and the rest were consistent small laughs.
Performance Critique: April 18a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrD-USwVvOM
1m27s Good sell on the snarkiness
2m14s Cut those two lines
4m58s Decent new save line
5m13s Change “throat” to “windpipe”
Overall: Decent for a mic. Newer stuff needs to be cut down.
