An open mic for five or six comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JThnzMkDxoU
3m26s Change strangulation to piano
4m40s Change this punch line
5m29s Change twelve to dozens
Overall: Weak even for a mic. The less people watching, the more I have to start my set by talking to people instead of going into jokes.
Late night music and comedy
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JqHheBZS70
0m29s The guy before me was doing Tupac covers, it was funny
2m54s Guy said “that’s a lot of people”
8m57s Don’t do all the bombing material in a row, even if it’s at a mic
9m24s Try adding “I’ll shimmy my way into your dreams”
10m04s This needs to be considered an A joke
Overall: Really good set, newer material and rewrites went over well.
A feedback mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wzR8103xSTU
1m21s Go higher energy
5m17s Cut dog foot and bear urine and knees
5m29s Cut Russian roulette lines
6m29s Change it to piano wire
Overall: Slow start then the second half went really well
A backroom bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzAhuyx4Qi0
1m15s Instead of “arms crossed like someone” try “arms crossed, I guess someone”
2m30s Good improvised moment that I should try to reuse
3m58s It’s funnier if I turn to the side before saying it
5m40s The better line is “if you keep saying wow”
7m30s Cut the dog foot and knees lines
Overall: Mediocre with a couple of big laughs.
A backroom restaurant show for 12-15 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1wiwK_M7Hf4
0m14s Add “good thing I didn’t mention it”
5m06s Turn to the person who said “oh no” to respond with “oh yes”
6m44s Go harder with the hand motions on “ooooh”
Overall: Decent. I got consistent laughs, with a few big laughs. It didn’t sound like I was having a conversation with the audience though.
