Performance Critique: May 18a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGCJ-uYdBeI

2m16s Make better circles with my hands

3m50s No need for the “there’s nothing funny about that”

Overall: Eh response but good job going between talking and material.

Performance Critique: May 17b

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1zE9xXkfJE

0m08s Four of the six audience members left right before I was brought up so I addressed it

1m29s No need to hold the mic stand the whole time

2m33s If I’m gonna do the head shake, it can never stop during the character

4m10s Change from a pointing motion to some other motion

6m13s If everyone else laughs at that, I can say, “I guess that holds true for everyone in here…”

7m11s Add in “this is the made up character”

Overall: Average set. Good crowd interactions in the middle.

Performance Critique: May 17a

Doing a spot on my Queens show for six people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjGQzMhUTSI

1m45s Instead of “jokes he wrote” say “some of his act for him”

2m18s If I’m gonna do the head shaking, it has to always be shaking, never stopping

2m58s Good job picking up on it and going with it

4m52s Add “because” in front of “those people have class”

5m05s Just go back into him without setting it up

7m00s Do a better drunk impression and set it up clearer

7m43s Mom should hold the mic stand with one hand

9m32s Good call back to previous crowd work

10m48s There’s a stronger way to do this

Overall: Good for six people there, could’ve ended stronger. I stayed in the moment and did a bunch of crowd interaction.

Performance Critique: May 16

Hosting an open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTThKzbgQoo

0m28s Think of a better hand motion

1m18s Grab mic stand with two hands for this character

2m22s Don’t say “netflix” like it’s a question

2m34s Start the hand motion earlier

Overall: Decent for going first on a Monday mic

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