Late night music and comedy
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7xbMCMRedo
1m04s Instead of “pissed off everyone” it’d be even funnier if I said “pissed off the two toughest looking guys in the room”
3m45s Say “talk” instead of “thing”
5m56s Say the sentence smoothly
6m00s Commit harder to the act out
9m55s Doing a joke I haven’t done in a few months at 2am right after waking up from a nap, nice
Overall: Respectable for having just woken up and good crowd interaction at the start
Going first on a 9PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oW8MyWl0O0
1m15s Good job doing a minute of noticing the room before going into the jokes and getting good laughs from it
3m00s Good save line
4m41s Good callback to previous crowd work
5m21s If breaking up the two lines with “you’re like, I do” the second line should be, “I need choking to fall in love” instead of “I need it to fall in love”
5m59s I can add in “this is the only time I can confidently say, mine is bigger than yours”
7m40s Lost them on this joke
Overall: Good crowd work to start and some of the jokes hit decent, but I lost them on the last joke.
A feedback mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6L_kVjS4Oo
5m54s This joke could use a few tags
Overall: Second half was stronger than the first half
Going last at a comedy and music mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikMjBt9fWZA
1m01s Add in “there’s an open sex slave mic after this show ends”
2m41s Over two and a half minutes before doing material, might be a bit long
5m29s Answer with “intuition”
8m38s Don’t over explain it
Overall: I did a good job of just talking to the audience at the start for a few minutes and got consistent low laughs afterwards.
A bar show for six or eight people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5497EH2Z7k
0m33s Milk it harder, “I would’ve left, hidden and had the camera ready for when he kicks off the chair”
3m27s If there’s that long of a lull, go into crowd work then a bit
3m53s Great improvised line
4m05s The mom thing isn’t clear because I talked over laughs
7m59s Change “knew” to “understood”
8m57s It should be “he’s so cutting edge” not “that’s so cutting edge”
Overall: Decent considering the small turn out. Some of the crowd interaction parts were good.
