Category: Comedy

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tV7LvN_n4Y

2m28s Stop pointing after the first line

Overall: Decent for checks

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7-AYUFeqYE

0m57s Before the act out say “that’s like walking into the office like”

1m44s Wipe lips after the lipstick line

2m39s Cut this joke

2m53s Lean into the character quicker and more aggressively

4m53s The mom character should always hold the mic stand with her left hand

Overall: Mostly tried out newer stuff and most of it needs rework or to be cut.

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=06Axjk00eCw

1m02s Use two hands for the motion

2m02s Acknowledge that one of their friends is clapping about it

5m11s Good job adding the “prove me wrong” otherwise it’s a bit condescending

9m21s Smile at the end of that line

Overall: Great set considering it was a check spot

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Q8ekcnEQQo

0m35s Do a bigger hand motion and for a little longer

1m07s Change “whatever” to “it’s okay” to mirror the first part of the joke

2m39s Explain the analogy before doing the act out

4m00s Point as I say the line

5m51s Nice honest moment

5m54s And then an improvised tag

6m45s Don’t point for that long

7m06s That’s a good add on

8m18s Say “Jesus can’t help you, he’s too busy with ripsaws”

Overall: Good but not great, a bunch of tags need work.

A late night comedy and music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W81ylJM4OXk

2m49s Maybe don’t do the Jesus joke first as the character

5m42s Good job addressing the heckle while keeping the set moving forward

Overall: Second half of the set was better than the first half.