A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=asz_KOelTOs
1m38s Make a more sudden wretching motion
5m21s Don’t do the riddle as my first joke in that character
Overall: Weak set with a couple of decent moments.
Performance Critique: May 31
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N1cHZnFAlJ0
1m35s Make it more obvious I’m tasting my fingers
5m21s Nice in the moment response
Overall: Good set with great crowd interactions.
Performance Critique: May 30
Hosting a mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uKXCBDCl8kk
2m54s Say “eating ONLY sea salt”
7m31s Reword to “to make an escape from a maximum security prison”
Overall: Weak response.
Performance Critique: May 29
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rb8HSZoaFVU
4m01s Wipe the lipstick in a more natural motion
5m03s Rephrase to “and already breadline worse than conga line”
5m34s Cut “I did”
5m56s Pivot around the room as the mom character for another second or two
6m39s Pause after “they do”
Overall: Eh. I mostly worked out older bits that I’ve reworded.
Performance Critique: May 28b
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_3qsz5gU3Y8
1m28s Sound drunker
2m55s I can have a line like “I guess they were like, let’s try again, we can’t do any worse”
3m21s Whisper “maybe”
Overall: Weak even for a check spot. I needed to be a little more high energy.
