Performance Critique: June 10c

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H5Ex3LahCOs

0m50s Fix the radar sound

1m53s Good improvised line about optimism

3m50s I should’ve gone into save lines two minutes earlier in this set

4m26s Move my eyes instead of my head

6m44s Change the chicken line

Overall: I bombed . I didn’t connect with the audience. There were a few ok laughs but way too many silent spots especially in the first half of the set.

Performance Critique: June 3a

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6r7OynFO7tk

0m35s Cut “my parents not your parents”

4m03s Say “how do you think I felt” before the lost luggage line

5m31s Say this line more sarcastically

8m22s Hit the friends line harder and do the hands and tongue for longer

Overall: Eh, consistently small laughs.

Performance Critique: June 2b

Late night at a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5NJCMlpIacE

1m03s Cut the “my parents not your parents” line

4m04s The stronger response is “so is droning on and on”

5m10s Say “how do you think I felt” before the lost luggage line

Overall: Second half went better than the first half

Performance Critique: June 2a

Hosting the second half of a mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KBcp_rKegD4

1m41s At least the save line works

4m55s Try ungripping my hand from the mic so both hands look like they’re on someone’s shoulders

Overall: Standard mic response.

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