Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0dpT5a0TdI
2m22s Stumble around more
3m45s This is a reminder to not do long act outs during checks
5m17s If saying someone is my favorite, tell the rest of the crowd to step it up
5m31s Hit “people” harder
6m44s The risk of asking the audience, if they don’t respond clearly it ruins the start of your joke
Overall: Weak even for a check spot. First joke hit and it was mostly downhill from there.
Hosting the second half of a mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rivtJ718KII
1m07s Make a more sudden retching motion
4m06s Try rephrasing to “just thought I’d tell you up front, so you’re less heartbroken later”
Overall: Decent for a mic.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0cC80jj25jQ
1m24s Stay moving and drunker throughout the act out
5m58s Heavier sarcasm in my tone
7m53s Do a better lipstick smear motion
Overall: Solid set.
An open mic (with a poorly placed camera)
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8U2-cg4eqo
2m40s Maybe try “mine stopped after me. I’m the first and last kid, only child.”
4m57s Say “but he has a life sentence” instead
5m23s Cut the riddle joke
Overall: Good for a mic.
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8NnX4a3-Jc
2m26s Make the premise clearer
3m04s Hit the mic harder
4m33s Cut the word “probably”
Overall: I got laughs from the people that were listening.
