Category: Comedy

Doing checks on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU_zU_N6KcI

2m28s The drunk rocking motion should be more random

Overall: Mediocre even for checks.

The 8pm show, checks dropped mid set

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NqL_pNDBJTw

2m00s The cuddling line might be too early

2m17s Sell the sarcasm harder, “I have no idea why he’s in prison”

3m30s Work on the drunk guy act out

5m20s For the hand motion, I should be between my mom and dad

10m33s Rephrase to “that other character Ben, he’s the made up one”

Overall: I was having a very good set until checks got dropped, at which point it went down to an average set.

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM-XHZ_xRPY

0m39s Good analogy, too bad I can’t recycle it

7m18s Rephrase to “I can’t marry you”

8m04s Cut the “when sixteen” line

8m34s Cut “I did”

8m58s Rephrase to “is my lipstick smeared?”

10m04s Good riff

10m52s Make a more obvious check mark motion

12m45s Say “the glow” instead of “a bit of glow”

Overall: Weaker than usual here, but I had some good improvised lines.

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRwaB4Aivx4

0m27s Try a different sound for the radar

0m42s Do the beeping sound at myself

4m26s Change it to “I can’t marry you”

5m07s The joke needs an end

5m24s Cut “I did”

5m49s Do a better lipstick fixing motion

Overall: Good for a mic. Act outs could be stronger.

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=El_a9-Dz2Mw

3m34s Keep my eyes open

7m29s That’s a good random line

7m44s Cut “I did”

9m41s Whisper this line

9m57s Go straight to the mom’s commentary without introducing it

10m52s Hit the line harder

Overall: Good set.