Category: Comedy

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iB3yViBxu0E

1m29s Think about adding hand motions to this joke

2m19s Do a hand shaking motion for her

Overall: Eh, got some laughs, did one new joke and two really old ones.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnBsQyaGhpk

0m47s Good correction

1m39s This sound works better than the previous one I was trying

4m51s Move my eyes more than my head

5m31s Sell the sarcasm of “no idea” harder

8m57s Sound happier about the box

9m24s Nice that the positioning gets a laugh without words

10m20s Do the hands by the face

Overall: Good set with steady laughs and a couple of applause breaks, but it could’ve been a lot stronger.

Doing the check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VAqrAbAtRg

0m35s The “beep” and the longer sound should have the same basis

2m25s Good response

5m13s Add “to home”

6m50s Say “That reminds me how I got…” to make it more conversational

Overall: Very good for checks. I didn’t even have to acknowledge that they were being dropped.

An open mic with ten comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pNUmv-jiG5s

1m59s Get a consistent sound

3m42s Change the cadence for the women’s prison line

4m22s This needs a different ending

Overall: Eh. Some things went relatively well.

An open mic with 6 comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpAb5alDrDE

1m25s Get a consistent sound for the disappoint-dar to make the callback easier

5m13s Don’t go up on “comedy”

Overall: Eh weak response.