Doing a check spot on the 9pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_RhAWopjbp0
0m41s Add “the rest of you need to catch up”
6m02s No clue why I asked where they were from, if I’m gonna try responding “it all makes sense now”
Overall: Ok for a check spot. Started stronger than it ended.
Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvHIo599fM
4m22s Scan the full audience for a second or two before the puppies line
6m18s Don’t stumble the lines. And reword the sentences around here.
Overall: Decent for checks, the mom not scared joke needs work.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f28bOFUKI5Q
0m21s This sentence needs to be way smoother and faster
3m23s Get rid of “being” in the sentence
Overall: Working out newer material at a mic.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMBFmXBYaoI
3m18s Shrug first, then say the line a second or two later
5m20s The uncomfortable line doesn’t work as well after a laugh
7m32s Slow down the hand motion
Overall: Solid set, parts of the last joke could’ve been stronger.
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPbn_69HO1E
1m52s A one person applause break during a check spot
2m50s Good job going where the crowd work took me
5m39s Could’ve added “now I’m your friend, I sold you out”
Overall: Good for a check spot.
