A 10PM show for 10-12 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_eYPaNgFSvc
2m35s Good job getting an extra laugh on the shoulder shrug
4m11s I can point without saying “this side of the room” to make it quicker
5m06s Put hand on hip on third “ha”
Overall: Consistent but low laughs throughout, with a couple of big laughs.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jcGTUm0K7yE
4m08s The crazy character needs to have more lines before doing this bit
Overall: Good for a mic
The 8PM show for 8 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g7-aAYkNid8
3m26s Don’t say “for example”
5m56s Don’t do the uncomfortable line after a big laugh
8m58s Make the security guard voice the same as before
Overall: Respectable considering there were only eight people in the crowd.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ybu_53Py5BM
0m34s Say the sentence without stuttering
2m21s Cut the “you’re looking at me like” line
3m08s Don’t pause after “might be” only after “overestimating”
Overall: I did some jokes that were so old they’re practically new.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOC1UcHlPgk
6m09s Add in “he’s like, “whew that was a close one””
6m56s Better than usual delivery on that line
9m05s Hand should go to the hip on the third “ha”
Overall: Solid set with good laughs throughout.
