Performance Critique: April 7b

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=strq3jicuX4

0m45s Add “that’s the real tragedy”

2m06s Good improvised line

3m36s Not sure what they said

5m41s Nice to see that line working

5m57s Say “I do take requests, thanks”

8m25s Hit “businessman” harder

Overall: Solid set

Performance Critique: April 6

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXuLOXzIGK4

1m38s No need for “I feel that” just go straight to “everyone”

3m07s Try “at least as far as the social security office knows” instead

Overall: Average to mediocre for a mic.

Performance Critique: April 5b

Doing the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDwVib2eTGY

1m24s That’s a good idea I can reuse: play elimidate from the stage

2m26s Don’t say “the only reason” twice in the sentence

3m20s Good callback to previous crowd work

8m05s First time the friends buying the DVD line got a bigger laugh then the mom line

Overall: Up and down set with a couple of good crowd interactions though.

Performance Critique: April 5a

Doing a set on my Astoria show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0_QYGW5kJc

2m29s Add a “yeah” before “I don’t know what that means either”

4m55s Say “real tragedy” instead of “true tragedy”

7m30s Call back to “it’s that easy” from the start of my set where I ranted

8m53s Businessman should be at the end of the sentence not the middle

Overall: Good consistent laughs from the small crowd

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