Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EOhIRNhO7_w
5m00s Could’ve addressed it a little sooner
5m08s But good job addressing it
Overall: Respectable for a check spot
Performance Critique: April 9a
The 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBHEoTgN1Ps
1m50s Stepped on a laugh a little
7m00s Glance around for an extra second
8m05s Hit “businessman” harder
Overall: Strong set.
Performance Critique: April 8c
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqnaD9w6pqM
1m44s She wasn’t responding to the joke, but I’m quite proud of my instant explanation
2m30s When they listen, I get laughs
4m22s Mad libs is the word I’m looking for
Overall: I was mostly ignored, but got laughs for the thirty seconds people didn’t pay bills in the middle.
Performance Critique: April 8b
The 8PM show with a light turnout
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hiTHNs9X7r0
5m34s Instead of “I don’t know why you’re laughing” I should say “unlike you, I was like, oh my god…”
6m16s Good job being in the moment
8m14s Figure out a better non verbal reaction for the security guard
9m31s I could also call him out for having an asian fetish
10m35s Good job continuing to play with pitting the sides of the room against each other
13m18s I don’t think the audience noticed the comics talking, so I shouldn’t have called it out
13m58s Going a little fast here, slow down
Overall: More or less consistent laughs through most of the set, the last minute got weak though.
Performance Critique: April 8a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVmFgXj4oyY
4m01s This should be in the crazy voice
4m48s The voice could’ve sounded crazier on “it won’t be”
Overall: Average to mediocre response for a mic
