An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s7LCbAUxoQo
1m12s Blackberry user line is a keeper
1m30s Cut the old people lines
3m09s No need to say those comments
5m09s Say “two of two” not “two for two”
6m18s Cut or rewrite this
Overall: Average to weak mic response while working out newer stuff.
The 10PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_9JwP8Nj9A
0m33s Good job starting with improvised stuff
3m18s Cut ore rewrite everything between “one mighta been an Android” to here
4m01s Cut the Prussia joke, although the improvised save line was good
5m45s It should be “have doctorate” not “get doctorate”
6m40s Cut or rewrite this joke
7m20s Cut the UFO line
Overall: The new mom rewrite worked well, the rest of the new stuff I tried needs to be cut or rewritten.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWbB0GeqNk0
0m10s Don’t start out so negative
1m52s Rework everything after “Android”
2m35s Keep cutting and rewriting the joke up to here
2m47s At least save lines work
3m42s Change “every time” to “whenever”
4m38s It’s not clear that I’m talking to myself, I need to learn to act better before doing this
Overall: Weak even for a mic. Rewrite and tighten the new stuff, and don’t start out so negative, even at a mic.
Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEiIZE4bAtE
4m04s Nice improvised line
9m19s No need for “unlike you antisemites”
Overall: Great for a check spot
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXAto53DbJA
1m24s Think of a smarter punch word than that
2m30s Cut this joke
3m27s Say “their” not “the”
3m35s Better yet, probably cut this joke
Overall: Working out newer jokes
