MCing my Astoria show for a very small person
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LnyTVAQnvM
1m06s A minute long pep talk due to the low turn out
3m22s Good job noticing something that was going on, but I could’ve gone a more unexpected direction
Overall: Decent for the tiny crowd. I worked out newer jokes and did a couple of little in the moment things
Going up 2 hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGjyPKFWgak
0m08s I should say “thank you” before starting my first bit as it seems weird otherwise
1m28s Go back to a one finger gun
2m35s That should hit harder, not sure why it didn’t
Overall: Decent but not great. I had 3 big laughs and the rest were consistent small laughs.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrD-USwVvOM
1m27s Good sell on the snarkiness
2m14s Cut those two lines
4m58s Decent new save line
5m13s Change “throat” to “windpipe”
Overall: Decent for a mic. Newer stuff needs to be cut down.
The 10pm show with 9 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UwnqrgN6fQc
0m07s Sound more annoyed during this sentence
2m37s Good improvised line
3m54s I love when this line hits this hard
5m52s Nice laugh to end on
Overall: Solid for nine people, and my two new jokes at the end went over pretty well
Going first at a bar show for 5 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmZ4gbzqCe0
1m44s Try crowd work at this point
5m08s This is a big laugh for this room
5m15s Make it “dog foot” instead of “dog feet”
7m19s Go to “really?” first if I get it right
9m00s I should’ve sat down in the chair
9m15s Crowd work is decent, might wanna keep the Friendly’s line
12m32s The worse I’m doing, the better that line does
16m04s Good improvised alliteration
18m32s Decent line
20m14s Put the hand down first, then lean forward
Overall: I did over twenty minutes without notes and stayed positive although I wasn’t getting much response.
