The writers mic, not hosting it for the first time in a while
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypfUAiJpPOg
1m22s Add in a “by the way” first
2m07s Pause before democracy
3m26s Try “EARLY inheritance”
3m30s Sell the heart attack better
Overall: The three new jokes need work but have potential. The millionaire joke could be worded better.
“Headlining” the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5a-usUKU2Yk
0m40s The microphone is having issues
1m39s That’s a funny from the crowd and I played with it well
4m08s Good job going into the crowd work here
4m44s Good job improvising a response
4m53s And a great improvised call back
9m15s Weird pause in that sentence
9m41s I said “three inch” twice by mistake
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XB0Hv3hYbJE
1m36s On the bright I got this joke down to under 100 seconds, but there were only three solid laughs in that time, I need to make it funnier or shorter
2m39s I could’ve added, “let me know if you need another four and half inches”
5m09s Commit to the song more
Overall: I had a solid 18 minute set with some good improvised lines throughout.
The 6PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tBAbEKxkjIM
2m36s I threw myself off and missed the “tell joke to drunks” part of the joke when I acknowledged the people
5m20s At least I’m going to crowd work after a bunch of jokes ate it in a row
5m59s Play with that more, if they have someone, I should ask them how they plan on killing themselves
Overall: I bombed. The first 45 seconds of crowd work went fine, then none of my material was hitting, and the additional crowd work missed too. The bright side is that I knew to go back to crowd work after the jokes weren’t working.
“Headlining” the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJ9jJClSt8Q
0m37s People were taking forever to pay their checks so I had to call it out
5m26s Put my hand on the back wall too
8m55s Good unplanned call back
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mL-bQMtzkdk
0m24s The waitress brought in a piece of cake with a candle because it was my birthday
1m09s I could’ve added “now that I’ve made everyone hate me by not feeding them, let’s do more jokes…”
2m11s Do a more obvious delivery on “so it’s worth it”
3m32s Say the “www” faster
Overall: Great set, and I was able to get the crowd back after the birthday song momentum killer
A 6:30 show with a light crowd
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4WgicmI8kFw
0m09s Slow down a little between thank you and spotting the girls
3m15s Good acknowledgement
4m52s This doesn’t sound off the cuff enough
5m39s Rethink the neurocommute and neuroathlete tags
6m59s Make “republican” the last word of the sentence
Overall: Not great not horrible. I should’ve tried to do a little crowd work in there as it didn’t seem conversational enough.
