A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4aYAKGo8hi8
0m44s If mesothelioma gets a laugh, I should try “you guys know diseases better than I do, cause all I know is”
2m03s Smile a little more during this bit
2m47s Soufle hero is even better
3m58s Twirl the hair in the same place
5m34s Turn to someone and go “get out, dude”
Overall: Working out newer jokes, they need work but at least kitchen hero gave me an idea for a tag.
MCing my Astoria show for six audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SInOA161kbk
0m57s Ask what she studies
6m17s Make it the same girl as the previous joke
8m41s I’m going too long without doing crowd work
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dvzp_DNwOl8
0m25s Go with the mess up, or address it more
0m58s Try a little harder to end on a laugh, especially since it’s my show and I can go long
5m04s Address the interruption more, get a laugh from it, say something like “Wow, Jewel still has more fans than me”
6m41s That’s a strong laugh to end on for this crowd
Overall: Mediocre to average. The jokes in between the comedians did fairly well.
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic, with the microphone not working
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_X47M0JVdc4
1m24s Say that line more seductively
3m04s Call out my lack of smooth running technique
3m50s Try “how about nineteen out of twelve?”
4m40s The toothpaste line is good
Overall: Working out some newer jokes, and as usual they need work
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8D81nhgapk
1m45s Address the crossed arms sooner, or get a laugh before going back into material
4m08s I got a little more annoyed than needed, and I should’ve pointed out “like the rest of the audience doesn’t know that’s bad”
7m24s No need to keep going back to it, although it worked out this time
9m18s Change the neuro examples
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XNPZUUHrI64
1m08s I should’ve called them out, “what you guys don’t like the internet?”
Overall: Good but not great. I should be more playful about getting interrupted the first time and not get visibly annoyed right away.
A late night music mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dauix65ZOtg
2m22s That’s funny
5m05s Cut “taking their time”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DR_MLWGrekM
1m24s Better response “my skit was going great until you called it a skit”
5m40s That was a good call back
7m55s Sell the “that’s so cutting edge” more
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DDtZqfoLmYo
Overall: Not great but it was 2am and I had fun BSing and doing a couple of jokes, and the “Kodak graveyard” improvised line is going in as a permanent tag.
