A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLZkoQ7lrlM
0m19s The comedy police would ask “have you been doing punch lines today?”
1m19s Cut the labor markets line
2m27s Reword to “all you do is funny business”
4m10s Cut the politician part
Overall: Working out rewritten jokes.
Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrRHz_rV1OE
0m45s After “that only took like ten seconds” say, “now we can cuddle”
3m29s Sound a little more excited about the impression
5m42s Do a smoother setup for this joke
6m11s Do walk to the back of the runway like a model would do
8m46s Get a better chart to end the joke on
10m05s Commit harder to the dance
Overall: Eh. The corporate girl joke worked well, everything else had a weak response.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWUl8Y6JH98
0m53s Change “if the girl” to “if my girl”
1m05s Smoother on the wording
1m45s Change the chart I’d bring
5m12s I need to do the Russian mom stuff that works first, otherwise it’s not a good test
5m54s More emphasis on “guys just got tired of waiting”
Overall: Decent for a mic. I need to not stumble over words when doing new jokes.
Doing a regular set at my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E52QJyhkkxE
0m27s Don’t punch “twice” that hard
5m14s Decent save, but I’m using too many of them
6m21s Gas furnace line feels a bit forced
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KuYPmugY7Io
1m55s Best laugh of the set
Overall: Pretty weak. When material isn’t working I need to go into crowd work, not more material.
Going last on a 3 hour comedy show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4QVMSUYmuXA
1m27s Try saying “NPR” instead of “Obama”
Overall: Decent only considering how long the show had been going.
