Going last on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OgfPTWc2mTM
0m14s Wait for the clapping to stop before talking
4m45s No need to say this line after the last line got a decent laugh
5m55s Look at the “republicans” when I say “I don’t pander”
Overall: Decent but I feel I could’ve done better.
Doing the check spot on an extra obnoxious and drunk 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4oU3Eg_wjI8
1m56s A one person applause break during checks, nice
3m18s This is the first time this sort of interruption happened, it was rather funny
7m02s Someone tipped over the camera
Overall: I had fun with making the announcement’s during checks
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYu6CaHbh6A
3m43s Give a smirk after “war profiteering”
Overall: I got some laughs but I wasn’t having fun and I didn’t really talk to them or find little moments in which to improvise.
An open mic with 6-8 real audience members there
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=En1cBiexrwQ
2m12s Good job being in the moment and earning a lot of extra laughs
6m45s Keep the side comment
Overall: Very solid set. The rewritten mom jokes at the end could use a little tightening.
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHgQOqgncxQ
4m32s Decent improvisation
9m38s Good improvised rant
10m49s Reword to “just picture this set”
14m45s She makes a point because the gate shouldn’t go below 90 degrees
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOM4M7mWWj4
2m18s Having someone do the the joke with me was fun
7m35s Don’t say “business” twice in the same sentence
8m22s Change “empathy” to “compassion”
Overall: I had fun rolling with all the interruptions and such.
