An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rIwTpbzMB-Y
0m40s Probably not worth keeping this joke
1m46s Don’t crack a smile
2m48s Rewrite everything after “they leave my house scratched”
4m50s Step into the punchline more
Overall: Decent for a mic.
Performance Critique: January 19b
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0-8kzHOZx1A
0m14s Pause after “guys looked up”
4m33s Too much delivery on “like a normal person”
4m49s Cut the line “you’re not funny” go straight to “I don’t appreciate your jokes”
Overall: Decent for a check spot.
Performance Critique: January 19a
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dabY7nF8i7g
4m11s The last line calls for another candy reminder act out
Overall: Okay for a mic.
Performance Critique: January 18
MCing my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLM3hKBvCmU
2m45s Act out a dirty Ben hotline
7m44s Flip the order: She should talk about me first, then Sandeep
9m45s Doing time between comics
15m02s Try rephrasing to “only thing that funny is your income”
Overall: Decent crowd work and energy, but I could still be higher energy
Performance Critique: January 17
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UE_r89z6gvY
2m01s The “physically” isn’t a punchline, cut it
2m57s Do a more convincing hair twirl
5m42s Teenager line is a keeper
6m43s Cut this line
Overall: About the level of laughs one expects at a mic.
