Category: Performance Critiques

A Saturday afternoon mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DjL6MfWL8Q

1m55s Cut the accomplice line

3m31s Cut “quite the seamstress

5m50s I look miserable

Overall: Weak even for a mic

The check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wslFzYx4zN8

1m56s The three people listening are enjoying it

3m08s A three person applause break during checks is nice

Overall: Decent for a check spot

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8p797VQ-xKw

0m48s Say something funny instead of just stopping and saying “hi”

1m32s I love when the mic breaks

3m05s Address the heckle better

4m59s The last 3.5 minutes would’ve been way funnier with the microphone on

5m38s Don’t say the same TV line twice

Overall: Bad set but good job not showing how annoyed I was that the mic was broken for four of the seven minutes.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uSS7GjTF5WY

0m38s My satire skills aren’t that strong

2m21s Cut the tags after “pliers”

2m40s Cut the “quite the seamstress” line

2m53s Cut the “you’re just gonna leave in an hour” line

4m14s No need for the “surprisingly line”

Overall: Decent for a mic but nothing great.

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enSaeWHbbBE

8m27s Say the line angrier

9m48s That’s a good save line. I should’ve used it much earlier in the set

9m56s No need for the tag

11m27s It doesn’t make sense to say that line after having a mini conversation, only do it after a joke

Overall: Weak first half, better second half.