Doing a filming for an online site, so I was supposed to look straight ahead and not interact with the audience too much
httpv://youtu.be/sImQa1inTLU
4m26s Good job with the pauses here
7m25s Didn’t really need a save line here
Overall: Mostly consistent laughs, but the first 7 minutes went better than the last minute.
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/4cWFKuI4BmE
2m15s Tighten the setup to “People in Connecticut would complain about things an immigrant would never complain about.”
4m01s Try “that’s not a qualification, right?” instead of “that’s not the same thing, right?”
5m27s Emphasize “full time”
Overall: Ok set.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/XA7SWMvM_F4
3m08s Make this setup one sentence instead of three jumbled sentences
4m01s Don’t look down on the punch word
5m25s Don’t have my head so low
8m42s Adjust the mic stand at the start, so it doesn’t look weird and awkward at the end when I don’t have time to adjust it properly
Overall: Solid set, and the new bit about SEFFs is finally starting to work.
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/amDbtgqDhzE
1m01s Hit “disappointdar” harder
Overall: Ok. A little up and down.
The 8pm show for very light crowd
httpv://youtu.be/VwJIjMC7T0M
1m21s Slightly weird cause the audience member is too young, but everyone else was a couple
3m20s Try opening my eyes wide for the positive smile
9m47s Mouth “call me” more clearly and slowly
Overall: Eh, even for a small crowd. On the positive side, it looks like I’m having fun the whole time.
