Going up towards the end of an 8:30 show for 8 or 10 people
httpv://youtu.be/FV3xpzskE3w
0m48s Cut the “we’re gonna have fun” line
Overall: Pretty terrible. Barely got any laughs and I didn’t try to bring them in with crowd work.
Performance Critique: December 14a
Going up second with a particularly chatty audience
httpv://youtu.be/61-NwMIM7HI
0m52s Emphasize the word “AND”
4m54s Don’t go up on the word “mom”
5m30s I missed the end of that joke about “now she’s looking at me like ‘maybe I do wanna marry you’”
6m03s Get more worked up
Overall: Not a great set but did a decent job dealing with all the talking and interruptions.
Performance Critique: December 12
Going up last 2.5 hours into a show
httpv://youtu.be/UZ-kndgFbp0
0m08s Don’t start out with putting that thought in their head
0m49s Need a better line for if they disagree with me
1m29s Sell the woah harder
2m57s Sell the “just cause”
3m02s Avoid the getting smart comments
4m12s Say “turned into” instead of just “is”
4m21s If the Russian stuff missed that bad, I probably shouldn’t have gone into more of it
5m20s Try to stay in tune for the end of it
5m29s It got a laugh no need to say “it went nowhere”
Overall: Started out okay enough but got weird and low response for the two Russian bits at the end.
