Performance Critique: November 16

A bar show in NJ

httpv://youtu.be/QUF5pH53P-I

2m08s Repeat “power drills and wood chippers” before the home depot tag

4m00s It should be “or we’ll shoot you” not “kill you”

11m52s Don’t stumble on the line

Overall: Solid set except for where the Kazaam joke fell flat.

Performance Critique: November 15

A 9:30 show

httpv://youtu.be/avaXha-c1Fs

1m45s The insurance riff might be worth trying as an actual bit

5m58s Don’t clasp hands together on “roomfuls of strangers”

6m29s Cut the DMV line, doesn’t make sense

7m59s Hit “this is over” harder

Overall: Good set, spent two minutes riffing at the start and said a bit at the end for the first time that has potential.

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