Month: December 2011

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/UiJKw2nCT1E

2m45s I confused the order but it still worked. Should be “Bill and a six pack”

4m01s I forgot the last part of the cell phone like marriage bit

4m22s Rework the “what’s next” part

5m02s No need to make it “sister’s” infant, just an infant

6m26s Try a slight pause after “so”

7m18s I hate that this is the line that gets an applause break

7m54s Funny cause this happened a week or two ago, and I made a good guess about it

8m58s Don’t change hands where I keep the mic for the two characters

10m07s Pause for an extra half second before “I’m allergic to nuts”

Overall: Good set of doing mostly newer material without setting it up with the older material.

Going up around 3am at a music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/3FQvqb84ihY

0m55s People were talking so when it’s this late, I just wait til they stop

1m20s If I get that kind of weak/little response I can say “that’s how I felt about it too”

2m55s Change “pretty one” to “blonde one”

6m58s It should be “he tells me” instead of “he goes”

8m43s Hit “12^th century” harder

Overall: Decent for the time of night. The new bit at the end wasn’t as strong as the slightly older stuff.

Going in the middle of the 9pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Pl2OayZLNdI

2m07s It should be “he tells me” instead of “he goes”

2m17s It should be “movie watching” and no stutter

3m21s Might wanna cut the bottom rung line, or put it after the protesting part

5m27s Drop both hands to the side

Overall: Solid but unspectacular set, slightly better considering I did a bunch of newer material.

A 7:30 show

httpv://youtu.be/qNtv6ElEVbY

0m37s This used to hit a lot harder, rewatch old videos and see what I’ve changed

0m50s Slow it down a little and visualize the shoes

5m30s Add “and keep it positive” in the setup

6m06s It’s better to do this right after a mom impression

Overall: Solid set with an applause break in the middle but some of the punch lines could’ve hit harder.

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/gh6Tr0TpkBQ

0m27s Take a slight pause after “junkie”

1m17s Nice little improvised line

2m35s The kid was too young to point at, find someone who looks 25 or over

3m08s It should be “King’s Palace”

3m27s Take a slight pause before “phone charger”

6m33s Not sure if I need “full contact sport”

6m53s Make it two hundred thousand instead of twenty

7m03s I heard talking but shouldn’t have addressed it as it wasn’t that loud

7m30s Not even sure what he said

8m28s Decent job working my way back into the material

8m40s Should be smiling more during this part

9m46s I missed the line of “maybe I’ll get married at 41 when I should be dead anyway”

10m00s Shouldn’t have gone into that bit after the interruption

10m21s Could’ve asked if she had to see any family

10m49s Checks are dropping

11m13s Make a sentence, and I forgot to do the grandpa criticizing me part

11m52s Don’t say dip twice in a row

11m56s Don’t use the word “sad” let them figure it out

13m53s Suicide then murder should be the setup

Overall: It went a lot better than I remembered it going, and the interaction with the heckler seemed smoother than I remembered it going. I should’ve still been even gentler on the first response. Set got weaker at the end due to checks dropping.